SIP_26 (A trip to the Underworld practice outcome)

Practice outcome

I was really happy with the outcome however, after the crit I decided to work on problems people pointed out.

Problems:

  1. People who don’t know the book Dante’s inferno will find it hard to follow
  2. Some of the circles are boring and being overshadowed by other circles
  3. It’s hard to focus on the individual circles when there are 2 other ones on the screen

Possible solutions

  1. Add text
  2. Show one circle at a time (refere back to SIP_19 (Development 1))
  3. Use different background
  4. Edit the circles in a surreal way
  5. Revisit the compositions of the individual portals

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