I was really happy with the outcome however, after the crit I decided to work on problems people pointed out.
Problems:
- People who don’t know the book Dante’s inferno will find it hard to follow
- Some of the circles are boring and being overshadowed by other circles
- It’s hard to focus on the individual circles when there are 2 other ones on the screen
Possible solutions
- Add text
- Show one circle at a time (refere back to SIP_19 (Development 1))
- Use different background
- Edit the circles in a surreal way
- Revisit the compositions of the individual portals